Usually done in groups of 3. You need to model:
Someone orally tells their story. Other 2 say–
-what I liked about your story is
-If it were my story this is what I would do..
-then storyteller revises

Writing Process:
-Show, don’t tell
-eliminate background
-figurative language
-use verbs with narrow meanings
-RESPOND, DON’T REPORT

Fewer photos is MORE

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